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A Study in Surrender

(in Vivian’s voice from THE ART OF QUIET RESISTANCE)

...

Come closer.

No need to be afraid, my darling—

not of me, not of this.

I have lived long enough to know

when a woman is vulnerable

to the precise weight of her own longing.

And you, my dear, are trembling on the edge,

breath hitching like the last note

of a love song sung too sweetly.

.

I have seen this before.

I have written the chapter,

penned the verses in ink and skin,

pressed my name into the sighs of lovers

who swore they had never been kissed

until they were kissed by me.

.

Do you wish to try and resist?

By all means, amuse me.

But I see the way you lean in,

the way your fingers ghost over

the cuff of my sweater,

testing the fabric as if

testing your own resolve.

.

I have spent decades perfecting this art—

the slow curl of a glance,

the pause just before a touch,

the moment between invitation and inevitability.

I know how to leave a woman breathless,

how to make her feel alive,

how to pull the silk thread of desire

until restraint unravels at her feet.

.

You asked me, once, what it would be like.

A date?

How quaint.

I am not a woman of candles and pleasantries.

I am the quiet turn

in the conversation

that leaves you gasping for air.

.

You think you are safe.

You are not.

.

And yet, my love, you have never been safer.

Never more seen, more known.

Never more willing to be broken open,

to be written into something greater

than the life you’ve held at arm’s length.

.

So, if you must speak,

choose wisely.

.

Choose what you know to be true.

Choose the word that will set this into motion.

.

Please.

.

Ah.

.

That’s the one.

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For the ARTSTACK

The Poetry Haul Challenge

Week Nine - #artstackpoets #artstack

This week’s words are: try, love, sweater, please, broken, vulnerable, date, alive, turn, chapter

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Cendrine Marrouat - Artist's avatar

Us—

late night again

sharing the vulnerable and broken

breathing in and out love’s anchoring chapters

Us — knowing what it means to feel alive.

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Prompt words: love, broken, vulnerable, alive, chapter

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NB: This poem is a vardhaku, a poetry form that I invented a few years ago. For more information, visit https://creativeramblings.com/vardhaku/.

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@ARTSTACK

#artstackpoets #ThePoetryHaul

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